Looks complete to me! I’m enjoying the strip, btw.
The profile for Tripp’s computer has a grammatical goof. You have the contraction for “it is” instead of the possessive pronoun “its” (as in his hers its). Sorry, couldn’t resist.
Thanks for pointing that out! There were a couple other things I needed to fix so I’ll adjust that as well.
I appreciate your checking out the strip!
Hey I have my computer use HAL sound-clips from 2001 for various events, but otherwise my computer generally behaves better than Tripp’s.
Compiler failure: I’m sorry Dave. I’m afraid I can’t do that.
Break-point hit: What are you doing Dave? I think we should stop.
The fact that your name is Dave is so perfect, you almost have to.
I guess you could add to the King: In the end, he lost his head to a woman.
His is a true headshot.
This strip is great! It would make a great tv show, in my opinion. The characters all seem very well fleshed out, and their personalities and quirks just round out the story line perfectly. Great job! I’ll definitely be keeping up with this one
Thanks for giving the comic a try, darondax! Welcome!
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Looks complete to me! I’m enjoying the strip, btw.
The profile for Tripp’s computer has a grammatical goof. You have the contraction for “it is” instead of the possessive pronoun “its” (as in his hers its). Sorry, couldn’t resist.
Thanks for pointing that out! There were a couple other things I needed to fix so I’ll adjust that as well.
I appreciate your checking out the strip!
Hey I have my computer use HAL sound-clips from 2001 for various events, but otherwise my computer generally behaves better than Tripp’s.
Compiler failure: I’m sorry Dave. I’m afraid I can’t do that.
Break-point hit: What are you doing Dave? I think we should stop.
The fact that your name is Dave is so perfect, you almost have to.
I guess you could add to the King: In the end, he lost his head to a woman.
His is a true headshot.
This strip is great! It would make a great tv show, in my opinion. The characters all seem very well fleshed out, and their personalities and quirks just round out the story line perfectly. Great job! I’ll definitely be keeping up with this one
Thanks for giving the comic a try, darondax! Welcome!